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RRmike
07-03-2009, 05:44 AM
Recently my son found out that an essay he wrote (originally for a school assignment, called "My Favorite Place to Be") was chosen as third place winner in a national contest sponsored by the Outdoor Writers of America Association. (He placed first in a state competition sponsored by Ohio Outdoor News and they sent it on to the national one.) What makes me even more proud is the content of the essay itself and that, of all the places a 12-year-old would choose to be, he said what he did. I included it below. Hope you enjoy it too.

Squirrel or Not, in the Woods With Dad is the Place to Be
“Brad,” my dad whispered, “half-way up that tree.” I looked. Half-way up the old, gnarled oak was a squirrel.
We had been waiting for a long time for a squirrel in this tree to come out. All day, we watched squirrels play in that one tree, but never at the right angle. I was beginning to get frustrated because I was so anxious.
Now was my chance, but it quickly scurried around to the other side. It was almost as if the squirrel was playing a game with us. It always stayed on the opposite side.
This time we tricked it. My dad slowly walked around the tree, forcing the squirrel to come back around to my side, as it tried to keep out of the sight of my dad. As soon as it came into my sight, I raised my gun and fit it tightly into my shoulder. I peered down the barrel and lined up the iron bead with the squirrel. With my thumb I carefully switched off the safety, all the while keeping the squirrel in my sights. My heart was racing, and I could feel myself breathing heavily, but I tried to hold my breath. With my index finger I slowly squeezed the cold, metal trigger. BANG!
We were hunting in a private woods owned by one of my relatives. I was very excited to go hunting that day. It was only my second time. I was just now growing into my gun, a Savage model 220, .410 gauge, passed down to me from my grandpa. My grandpa bought the gun when he was about twelve years old. He went hunting for rabbits with a .22 caliber rifle when he was my age. When his older brother found out, he told him never to hunt rabbits with a rifle. That very day they went out and bought that shotgun. It was also the shotgun my dad used until he was in high school, when he bought a bigger gun.
Hunting has been a tradition in our family for over seventy years. It started with my grandpa's brother, who taught my grandpa to hunt when he was about twelve. My dad hunted with Grandpa when he was old enough. When I was ten, I started going along and actually hunting.
One of the many reasons that I like hunting is being out in the wild, alone with my dad. On a good day, the weather feels a little chilly, but sunny. The woods are quiet, and a light frost covers the ground. There are many trees all around, and their leaves are turning colors and falling. Adjacent to the woods lies a large cornfield. Sometimes the animals in the woods visit the cornfields to gather ears of corn. We sometimes spot deer moving along the edges of the cornfields. Usually my dad and I scare up flocks of doves.
Away from the city and all the houses, the woods is very quiet and relaxing. Even the chattering of squirrels and calling of birds is enjoyable.
Another reason I like hunting is the adrenaline rush. When I see a squirrel, my heart starts thumping quickly. My hands get sweaty and my breathing gets heavier. I aim my gun at the squirrel and carefully pull the trigger. Even after we bag a squirrel, I'm still very excited. If we don't get a squirrel, I'm still happy and was glad I went. In the woods, with my dad hunting, is my favorite place to be.




wallydog1
07-03-2009, 06:32 AM
Awesome, Great read, congrats to both of you and thanks for sharing :)

deerhunt45
07-03-2009, 07:32 AM
That's awesome ! Great read, congrats to you both and thanks for sharing :coolgleamA:

Deehntr56
07-03-2009, 08:13 AM
Great Story!! Those memories and the story will last forever....:)

riverdude
07-03-2009, 08:17 AM
Congrat's and yes a great read. Yous should be very proud.

You need to get a copy of it along with any awards he received and have it framed and display it proudly in your home.

"J"
07-03-2009, 08:43 AM
Great read and great essay, you read a lot between the lines about the relationship that you and your boy have. Enjoy and don't take it for granted, because later in life when he discovers women things will change lol. But seriously, congrats on a special award.

RichsFishin
07-03-2009, 09:57 AM
I am 38 years old and just lost my dad 3 weeks ago and that story made me cry like a little girl. My first hunting trip was hunting squirrels with a 410 with my dad and will never forget it. Good story and you sound like you got one hell of a son..........God Bless......Rich

OhioBoy86
07-03-2009, 12:10 PM
Great read, the descriptions make you see exactly what he was writing about. You must be very proud. The times you have spent in the woods are now forever in your minds and on paper! Thanks for sharing!

jackalope
07-03-2009, 02:30 PM
Great story, what am awesome thing to read and realize as a dad you had such an impact on your kid. Truly awesome

dar_54
07-03-2009, 09:38 PM
Great story, brings back some memories for me.

wildohio22
07-03-2009, 11:35 PM
good story, makes me anxious to have those oppurtunities with my boys when they get older, i never had that chance with my dad, he passed when i was twelve. he taught me how to shoot at very young age but never got the chance to take me out.

Cap't Ernie
07-04-2009, 05:32 PM
As a son, as aspiring writer, and a lover of all things literature and outdoors, I too have tears in my eyes. I am amazed at the high caliber of the writing and throughly invigorated by the essay.

Thanks for sharing.

Lance
07-09-2009, 08:52 AM
That's very cool, I'm sure that this has found it's way into "dad's special stuff" pretty quickly. Definitely something to be proud of!

tomviserta
07-09-2009, 09:34 AM
something to be really proud of!!

Hoytmania
07-10-2009, 08:31 AM
That was truely awesome. It reminds me alot of my son and I. I have been taking him hunting for about 4 years know and the memories I have will last forever.

Kudos to your son, I think he could already have a decent career if he wanted to in outdoor journalism. I was shocked at the choice of words and the descriptiveness in his writing. Like I said in the begining. Truely awesome. Congrats to your son for the wonderful work of art, and to you for inspiring it.

swantucky
07-13-2009, 12:14 PM
Great job to your son! You should be VERY proud!!